My soul-wings have grown,
And with the seeds we have sown..
Green breathes life divine,
Through this sea of a lifetime..
And within, above,
This ocean of love,
I can sense Sunshine..
Apart from the poem, let me stress on the fact that it's a 5-7 syllable pattern.. Also, it's a sort of a combination between a routine aabb rhyme with a limerick-style bbccb, which creates a half-Sonnet as I like to call it.. Yay!
Tuesday 1 May 2007
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2 comments:
fundoo rhymes !!
mathurji...aur sunder-sunder rhyme banaayie..nice to c u on blogs..hmmm..poora love-story likhne ke liye sahi aur upyukt jagah !!
Dhanyavaad. :D
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